Yay and slightly nay

I finally finished that portrait. I like it.. but a big part of me doesn't really. It took me a while.. that's all I have to say.
Graphite on Lucky Charms cereal box. Who says digging through FC trash in front of everybody during announcements doesn't pay off?

Every drawing that you see on here looks better in person. That, however, doesn't promise it's a good picture in real life. There are so many things I have to critique about it that I'll just stop here.